Critique Group led by Tanya Eccleston:
- Sense of the poetic (rather than prosaic)
- The shadows created where the paper curls away from the wall is interesting
- Suggested reading: The pleasure of the text Roland Barthes.
- Spoken word/trace
- Titling is important for giving clues to the viewer
- The titles could be more generous
- This work could be framed within a larger project
- Perhaps there could be an overarching title for the series
- Personal presence as complete
- Enjoyment of the scale of the work
- Literary artefact
- Enigmatic
- Sense of reverie
- Suggestions of a vitrine as an alternate way to display, so that the viewer can look down on the work
- Coherence –not logical
- Blog generating work
- No boundaries
- Suggested reading: The Medium is the Massage by Marshall McLuhan
- Work could be more political in my position as an artist
Rhubarb Pyjamas 